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Fauzia’s Rejection

A Bismil May 18, 2005

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#33 Posted by aashee on May 18, 2005 2:50:06 pm
Ok,...now how many Dark Sexy pricesses of the East get the oppurtunity to go and study abroad and come back to Desi land with a ``valaity`` degree tucked in their carry on baggage??? To me it was a very shallow peice of writing. The author needs to look deeper into the anguish and agony of the dark, short and not-so-sexy middle class girls who have to go thru all this once they reach their 20`s.
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#34 Posted by sajal on May 18, 2005 3:02:53 pm
Well done!!! powerful !!
It is a miracle how girls survive through this horrible process of picking and choosing.

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#35 Posted by slan on May 18, 2005 3:05:26 pm
If one were to speculate on the further turn of events in this story(although it is magnanimous of Jhon to have been willing to enter into a wedlock and not insist on being a `partner` with no resposibilities) ,what were the chances of Fauzia and her dear Jhon cheating on each other,divorcing each other,putting there children through the trauma and raising them up as single parents or maybe even abondoning them?In short screwing their lives seriously.

While the western culture has its advantages,they come at a cost.Its is not all goody goody.It is flawed in itself.They dont always live happily everafter.
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#36 Posted by echoboom on May 18, 2005 3:14:27 pm
...``She practiced safe sex and masturbated herself into climax regularly........

Now this is the creme-de-la-creme of the story. This is the stuff which separates an ordinary piece of swamp-reporting from the salinityand water-logged bog where english Literature erupts. Where rushdicks bloom like cactii and where WolfeVaginas blossom like briars.

A lot of stuff is between the lines & before the periods. For example it is silent the kind of equipment she used for safe-sex.

Then, this word `regularly` makes the whole exercise so matter-of-fact, so clinical, so dreamlike--that it moves it one notch up into cloud 9 & a 1/2 . `regularly`--this word cascaded out of the authors` keyboard and started talking here. As if it was not regular then there was no nirvanaa. Never knew there were other areas in a female anatomy where it is healthy to be `regular`.

Fantasizing BS this is ; 100% homespun autobiographical.

Arranged: Prince Charles to Diana
Deranged: Prince Charles to Camilla; Diana to Dodi etc etc etc.

Most goraa marriages are deranged. There is a divine-darwinian plan to keep them from evolving.

So it is and so shall it be written



PS: If she had shown her ..``dark chocolate areolas and a black triangle of hidden mystery..`` I could have accepted her ; if & only if she was a BMW...

Thanks Urstruly for a long lost memory
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#37 Posted by jang on May 18, 2005 3:21:59 pm
#36 echo, i got to agree that there is no such a thing as safe sex bet two individuals. but what are you recommending here, circumcision?
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#38 Posted by echoboom on May 18, 2005 3:27:58 pm
jang:37

Did you read the article?

& my post?

........``but what are you recommending here, circumcision?``.....

for you? sure!
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#39 Posted by HP on May 18, 2005 3:32:06 pm
#36

Now I don’t wanna turn this into some cheap sex experience discussion but Echo you really liked that Safe Sex, Masturbation and climax part. I skipped over it because I thought it was indecent to even read such things…But you… XXX Maniac!

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#40 Posted by echoboom on May 18, 2005 3:38:35 pm
HP:39
Did you miss this also?

``dark chocolate areolas and a black triangle of hidden mystery.

Correction: I`m YYY maniac.
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#41 Posted by HP on May 18, 2005 3:46:13 pm
#40 echoboom

``Did you miss this also?

``dark chocolate areolas and a black triangle of hidden mystery.
``

Yes! Completely! You really pay attention. I think you are XXX or why would you read such gandagi so meticulously?

What this world is coming down to.. Mullah posting about chocolate areolas and hidden mystery. Internet is bad influence you man!




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#42 Posted by echoboom on May 18, 2005 3:59:17 pm
HP:41
OK OK I`m smiling now!
Thanks!
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#43 Posted by ShoreSahib on May 18, 2005 4:01:26 pm
``Dark chocolate areolas and a black triangle of hidden mystery.``

I dont see what is the big deal. There is nothing obscene about it. The dark chocolate areolas and the black triangle of hidden mystery are symbols of a woman`s creative powers, her reproductive powers; the fountainhead of humanity.

Why is it that any sane and mature discussion of sexuality is percieved as `` GANDAGI``.

The Gandagi lies in the mind of those readers, the so-called patriarchal misogynistic goons of CHOWK.

How dare a woman bring herself to climax through masturbation. Chee Chee, Respectable Pakistani women are not even supposed to have Clitorises. Allah just created the clitoris by some quirk.

How dare a woman own up to the power of her reproductive organs, and dare say in public what men have always done. Ok maybe not Safe sex, but lots and lots of Masturbation.

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#44 Posted by ali1. on May 18, 2005 4:04:53 pm
``Fauzia stood in front a full length mirror, staring at her naked body. Her skin was a smooth mocha colored canvas of beauty on which were painted the dark chocolate areolas and a black triangle of hidden mystery.``

Ahem... I slid my chair all the way under my table in anticipation of a XXX story, but afsoos....

Vaisay, I don`t think desi women have anything but ``dark chocolate areolas`` and ``black triangle of hidden mystery``........ Even with gori blondes, the triangle is black most of the time. Viva La Clairol!!




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#45 Posted by ShoreSahib on May 18, 2005 4:07:32 pm
Re: # 44
I think you have been downloading way too much Porn off the internet.
tsk tsk
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#46 Posted by ali1. on May 18, 2005 4:08:41 pm
``those rare progressive desi single men``

errrr, you forgot to add effiminate... but anyways, yeah, we have some desi gays in SFO... ask shore sahib
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#47 Posted by ali1. on May 18, 2005 4:12:09 pm
#45 shoresahib,

It`s MY internet connection, MY credit card and MY PC...... bhai sahib what goes of anyone`s father, hian ji?
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#48 Posted by ShoreSahib on May 18, 2005 4:22:21 pm
Re: # 47
What a translation; Took me a while to figure out what you were saying!

Kisi key Baap ka kya jata hai. `` What goes of anyone`s father``


Funny!
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