The Inheritor
Ramesh Mishra May 25, 2005
#1 Posted by mohar11 on May 25, 2005 10:47:36 am
Your score: Poor, 3 out 10..... also, ever heard of a spell check software?
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#2 Posted by cayenne on May 25, 2005 5:19:52 pm
This is so depressing.This guy must be a manic depressive.Thank God for Bollywood.
#3 Posted by s-s on May 26, 2005 12:25:39 am
Liked your wry humour. Good read. Needs a grammar/spell check though.
#5 Posted by kafka on May 26, 2005 2:21:11 am
Re: # 2Yes. It’s really depressing. At least, I could evoke that in you! As you said, a bollywood masala is far better. I agree. Best.
#6 Posted by bidisha on May 26, 2005 4:20:05 am
the dark humour and scorn are too on the face. the description sometimes overshadows the storyline, and perhaps, reflects a confusion of thought.continuity needs to be checked.nonetheless, likeable.
#7 Posted by subroto on May 26, 2005 5:05:30 am
Some parts are quite good except that the ending is a bit abrupt (especially when you have crafted it well and built the atmosphere slowly). Is this chapter 1 of a novel that you are writing?
#8 Posted by tahmed32 on May 26, 2005 6:15:59 am
Re: # 7 testing.
(I am sure the article is good too).
(I am sure the article is good too).
#9 Posted by anokhi on May 26, 2005 12:53:31 pm
Re: # 6
I`m just curious...is this Bidisha Majumdar?
I`m just curious...is this Bidisha Majumdar?
#10 Posted by rahul_capri on May 26, 2005 4:20:33 pm
Ramesh, this was a lovely read.Reminded me of The Outsider by Camus. Would await more from you.And Subroto,I think this story is complete in itself.
#11 Posted by shobig_sifar on May 27, 2005 6:39:03 am
Some phrases are intense, poignant and manage to leave an impact. Starts on a heavy note, but tends to lose the grip towards the end. Nevertheless, a good read. Do look forward to read more from you, albeit there`s room for improvement.
ps. Please do not forget to give it a proof-reading before you submit next time.
regards
ps. Please do not forget to give it a proof-reading before you submit next time.
regards
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