sheema durrani August 16, 2005
#5 Posted by zainabsiddique on August 17, 2005 1:23:41 am
A BEAUTIFUL COMBINATION OF FEELINGS AND LANGUAGE ESPECIALLY IN THE SECOND STANZA! THE MESSAGE THAT IT GIVES ME IS THAT WE MUST NEVER LET OUR DREAMS AND ASPIRATIONS MAR THE BEAUTY OF OUR PRESENT AND THAT IT IS NEVER TO BE OVERLOOKED BUT TO BE ENJOYED.
#4 Posted by BeeJay on August 16, 2005 9:05:50 pm
Different people read poetry differently. I like this poem, which is apparently about a broken relationship, in which one party was blind-sided, and she is now trying to find her way back. A bit too melodramatic and also a little too pessimistic at the end! However, everyone has own style. Pay no attention to hecklers, if any. On second thoughts, DO keep track of them and pay them all back (and then some) in their own currency, when THEY get around to writing theirs! Yeah!
#3 Posted by nefertiti on August 16, 2005 8:33:42 pm
Or too busy stifling my screams
In our daily rituals
These lines are expressive of the nature of many women`s lives.Hopefully, they will wake up and live their lives bravely rather than give up, unable to recognise the chances that life may offer, without sinking further into despair as this poem seems to suggest.
In our daily rituals
These lines are expressive of the nature of many women`s lives.Hopefully, they will wake up and live their lives bravely rather than give up, unable to recognise the chances that life may offer, without sinking further into despair as this poem seems to suggest.
#2 Posted by khamkhwa. on August 16, 2005 5:14:50 pm
Of children yet to be born
The stale remnants of virgin dreams
...bibi toba karo...kevin gallan kerdi ho...
The stale remnants of virgin dreams
...bibi toba karo...kevin gallan kerdi ho...
#1 Posted by scout on August 16, 2005 4:29:19 pm
wellbutrin may do you good, i`m not being mean, it`s a sincere piece of advice
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