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The Aftergod

Nadeem F Paracha June 10, 2005

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#25 Posted by shobig_sifar on June 12, 2005 12:32:40 pm
Re: # 24 Dear lady, imagine if someone from Urstruly, Echoboom or Naqshbandi`s tribe ever quoted some Quranic verses, and ventured to elucidate them in an attempt to spread God`s massage, what sort of treatment would they receive at the hands of Mr Paracha and the likes? To what extent could they be rediculed and bashed by these self-poclaimed beacons of peace and professors of a Godless Earth?
The trouble is not the belief, but the espousing and imposing of it on others, even if that involves blasphemy and desecration of other people`s beliefs or theocracies.
I haven`t even attempted to pay the devil his due. :)
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#24 Posted by ana on June 12, 2005 10:47:28 am
nadeem:

this was not ``below average``. not original, but not below average. :)

i think while others are castigating you for writing about a godless earth (as if you are the only one who`s written about it!), godot may be the only one who has seen this, as i do, as a satire. and the dialogue doesn`t mar the piece here. . . it is still a rough plot afterall.

a godless earth though? even with the presence of ``that force somewhere, or anywhere but our hearts`` we have turned people into gods, ideas into gods, ones we ditch (and vice-versa) when we don`t serve each other`s purposes. the ongoing battle (according to certain beliefs) is for earth, and our hearts, but there are those of us who like jesus at the end of this, are confused, what is ``god`s will`` all about, and what the heck is all this about free will?! and what is our will in the face of the will of the leaders who say they will deliver us or bring us so much closer to ``a peaceful earth``?

i mean look at you, you`re a peddler, and there are those who elevate you to such heights, it`s damn near embarrassing. you`re human like the rest of us, who has ideas that people may or may not agree with. obviously ``heresy`` is not tolerated well here. i should be upset that you had god turn jesus into mud!!!

best,
ana

p.s. i had no idea that karachi was such an anonymous nook of the world! as for NFP ``bent`` on turning the world godless, there are those who already believe that the world is godless -- would you believe, they`re called atheists!
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#23 Posted by shobig_sifar on June 12, 2005 9:11:58 am
If a man does not find any evidence that he was created by a God, he creates his own God/Gods. God is inevitable for the human society!

Three fourth of the world`s human population bears a conviction tha God exists in some form, and half of them undoubtedly adhere to this belief wihhout any enforcement, and are contended with it. And an N F Paracha sneaks out from some anonymous nook of the world and is bent upon turning the world Godless, does that make any sense?
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#22 Posted by atif2 on June 12, 2005 7:24:42 am
#7 by supersize asks ``kindly anyone please tell me a bit about all these other demons and angels whose names NFP has used here.``

supersize, its strange that instead of posing this question to the writer, who frequently responds on his boards, you would ask other people! Is it because you think NFP is too high and mighty an entity to be directly posed a question to?

I also heard a few interactors previously talk about how NFP represents the ``unrealized dreams of a generation``. That literally threw me out of my chair. Granted, I have been living in Boston for a while, but still, I believe I am fully in touch with Pakistan. Why didnt I ever hear of this ``unrealized dream`` untill I registered on Chowk a year ago?? Why is it that his below-average at best articles garner such strong adulations from a certain group, the same group considers itself not worthy enough to pose direct questions to NFP?
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#21 Posted by Ameena on June 11, 2005 10:38:19 pm
NFP, you`re quite a genius and that has never been an issue. Do not get derided by close mindedness of some people who typically get scared of what you stand for and advocate.

I loved this play. It is one of your finest articles on chowk.

Love,
Ameena
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#20 Posted by stinger_kh on June 11, 2005 5:57:31 pm
Re: # 19
Yup u r better on sex topices
God help Leafyglade
Editors wakeup:P
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#19 Posted by Urstruly on June 11, 2005 5:02:41 pm

I told you to try write about sex, it sells better than even blasphemy
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#18 Posted by Naqshbandi on June 11, 2005 1:50:14 pm
Re: # 17
to ther author: it is not the content nor the idea but the disrespectful tone adapted towards the nabis and payambars and malaaika which made your piece so hard to swallow...

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#17 Posted by Raw_Dust on June 11, 2005 1:39:53 pm
Naqshbandi bhai:

take it easy. Yea, we murtids are gonna get burned in hell, i`ll be asking welding supervisors for a spark or two to light up my joints in between pyro sessions so yea it will be all good.

I think you should upgrade us to Munafiqs cos the pyro intensity a Munafiq gonna get in hell is supposedly way too higher than murtids, kaafirs combined. has got more bite to it, you know.

cheers man.

NFP: i have not read your play so i got no comments. :-)

wama alaina illal balagh.
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#16 Posted by shockthemonk on June 11, 2005 12:02:09 pm
Superb. Khool imagery, very much NFPsque. So your personal war with distorted faith goes on. But let`s say someone in Pakistan would like to stage this play, will they be able to?
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#15 Posted by baaghiraja on June 11, 2005 11:07:55 am
828

In traditional Christian theology, Lucifer was once second in command to God. However, he lusted after God`s position and wished to be first. He led a revolt against God and led as many as ``one third`` of the other angels. He lost and was banished to the Earth to roam until Judgment Day. His followers were the fallen angels and became demons and evil spirits. The Book of Revelation states that Lucifer and his followers will be banished to Hell forever. This is usually called ``The First War In Heaven.``
The play takes place in a second such war.

rgds,
NfP
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#14 Posted by 828 on June 11, 2005 10:58:49 am
Nicely written. The fuzzy-boundries of good and evil were portrayed quite well. However, the whole story climaxes to a flawed conclusion. The two lines ``A godless Earth. A peaceful Earth.`` Up until that point it was a good story; and then it became humanist/athiest propoganda. We all know that humans are flawed and complex. Our capability of performing extremes and the ability to affect others on larger scales than any other animal is the reason why the concept of a peaceful earth is elusive. To an equal degree, our Earth IS a godless earth as much as it is one with God. And no distinction can be made of insanity, stupidity and desire on either side.

Oh..and..it is not necessary for God to actually talk to Adam or Eve or any other human for us to conceive/know of him. So even in a godless Earth, where humans where never contacted by a God (whether existing or not), some of them would naturally turn to reach out to a higher unifying entity that could conceptually tie in the vastness and complexity of this universe.

Some would say this is because God is not a distinct separate being that he can just isolate himself from us, but is inherently the foundation of reality.

Anywho, the Angel/Demons war concept is something that really interests me (e.g. the movie Constantine) and maybe if you could write about the 2 wars in detail..that would be neat.
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#13 Posted by baaghiraja on June 11, 2005 10:38:08 am
· Gracias godot/patwari/supersize/Che Guevara/naushinemirza


· Supersize
Yes Pazuzu was the demon used in all four Exorcist films. For brief profiles on all the angels and demons’ names I have mentioned just goggle ‘em.

· Naqshbandi
You suggested: ~~chowk allows such blasphemy and yet will censure us if we call a murtad a murtad!.~~
Well, now they have allowed you to say “Murtad a Murtad.” And now hear me say it as well: A murtad is a murtad is a murtad. So get over it, already.

You also suggested: ~~the author obviously has pretensions...borrowing from here and there...Iqbal`s impact is obvious that here the idea is perverted to blasphemous ends..I couldn`t even read all of it for fear of insulting some of Allah`s Beloveds...~~

I think you have a good enough a brain to critique a fictitious piece a lot more eloquently than with an abrupt (if not downright bigoted) “la hawla wa la quwwata ila billah...” By saying this if you expected me to vanish, well I didn’t. Next time, the wise, spiritual, naqshband Muslim that you are, try blowing me up through a suicide bomber (I recommend hamzad).

And also, if you do allow your righteous self to coment on my post, then this time around kindly do read the play in its entirety. Otherwise don’t bother.

rgds,
NfP
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#12 Posted by CheGuevara on June 11, 2005 9:16:27 am
That was fcukin beautiful man back atyou`re best, just please stick to fiction you get you`re point across so much better.
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#11 Posted by patwari on June 11, 2005 7:27:08 am
Alright here now come the self claimed keepers of the faith and god`s soldiers with their typical narrow minded crys of blasphemy, naqsh saab I have very high respect for you so please do not destroy my respecting image of you by making noises the kind we in Pakistan are sick of hearing from so many myopic mulaas. If you read carefully it is clear that the story is suggesting the end of god Satan and religion as we know it and doing so for what god originally stood for.
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#10 Posted by nausheenmirza on June 11, 2005 7:18:03 am
Cleverly done. Liked the way the author puts both forces of ``good`` and ``evil`` on the same boat.
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Interact Index

    #49 teazee
    #48 teazee
    #47 teazee
    #46 Raw_Dust
    #45 ntsyed
    #44 patwari
    #43 ntsyed
    #42 patwari
    #41 ntsyed
    #40 Raw_Dust
    #39 ntsyed
    #38 baaghiraja
    #37 shobig_sifar
    #36 ntsyed
    #35 vertex
    #34 SenseOffender
    #33 baaghiraja
    #32 baaghiraja
    #31 Saira_K.
    #30 patwari
    #29 atif2
    #28 hamzaad
    #27 ana
    #26 Raw_Dust
    #25 shobig_sifar
    #24 ana
    #23 shobig_sifar
    #22 atif2
    #21 Ameena
    #20 stinger_kh
    #19 Urstruly
    #18 Naqshbandi
    #17 Raw_Dust
    #16 shockthemonk
    #15 baaghiraja
    #14 828
    #13 baaghiraja
    #12 CheGuevara
    #11 patwari
    #10 nausheenmirza
    #9 Naqshbandi
    #8 baabray
    #7 supersize
    #6 supersize
    #5 patwari
    #4 hamzaad
    #3 Godot
    #2 maryal_farishta
    #1 cayenne

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