The Dance
Bibi K June 11, 2005
#1 Posted by dullabhatti on June 11, 2005 8:01:00 pm
good joice of name.
You can also right it in short as BBK.
You can also right it in short as BBK.
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#2 Posted by temporal on June 13, 2005 6:45:19 am
bibi:
staccato interspersed with legato creating the lights cascading effect in words and feelings ... this sums up She stands alone she watches
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staccato interspersed with legato creating the lights cascading effect in words and feelings ... this sums up She stands alone she watches
welcome to chowk
lve
t
#3 Posted by kaurasach on June 13, 2005 8:41:33 am
Its a surprise dulla read such poetry - let alone understood it!
#4 Posted by Nadia_Zehra on June 13, 2005 9:33:31 pm
Bibi:
You sound quite old phuppi though :
Her mind submits
Static her body
Tornado within
The stage the same
The last line drops off or it has a hidden vigilant meanings...
The overall attempt of poetry is quite dormant.
You sound quite old phuppi though :
Her mind submits
Static her body
Tornado within
The stage the same
The last line drops off or it has a hidden vigilant meanings...
The overall attempt of poetry is quite dormant.
#5 Posted by catfischblues on June 14, 2005 4:21:17 am
your comments appreciated temporal :)
Nadia_Zehra:
There are no hidden meanings in this poem, it lies bare before you. The last line you feel ``drops off`` has a reason for it being there. You may want to read it again to understand that reason.
And for everyone else who read my poem, I do appreciate it. :)
Peace.
Nadia_Zehra:
There are no hidden meanings in this poem, it lies bare before you. The last line you feel ``drops off`` has a reason for it being there. You may want to read it again to understand that reason.
And for everyone else who read my poem, I do appreciate it. :)
Peace.
#6 Posted by Adroit on June 23, 2005 2:04:59 am
I don`t understand! Does this weaken the glaze of a candle? You lie.
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