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A Moment of Silence

Ozer Khalid June 30, 2005

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#10 Posted by avkrishna on July 1, 2005 7:30:31 am
How about an `appropriate` amount of silence for Hindus killed over the ages across the world by Islamic and Christian fundamentalists?
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#9 Posted by husnaangelique on July 1, 2005 7:12:51 am
Ozer

An evocative, powerful and thought-provoking poem. A clearly well-researched piece....it seems you are quite interested by Latin America. I guess space was a constraint for you. You overlooked one important part of the globe: South East Asia. Your poem could have made a brief mention highlighting the plight of the people in South East Asia, like the dictatorial military junta in Burma, what Pol Pot and the Khmer Rouge did in Campbodia, Indonesia`s treatment of East Timor, Thaksin`s regime in Thailand and Lee Kwan Yu`s heavy-handedness in Singapore.

Nonetheless this poem is one of the best I have read thus far.......here you are truly at your best. Dont be phased by all these cyber-junkies who don`t cut you any slack. A lot of whom love to rumour-monger about you. You are a talented poet....keep on writing. Keep up the spirit.
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#8 Posted by scout on July 1, 2005 6:51:44 am
and i also think it`s offensive to put a time to silence, `moment of silence` vs. `lifetime of silence`

what are you trying to say? four thousand innocent people killed for nothing on a tuesday morning just deserve a moment because they are non-muslim?

this whole `moment of silence,` `month of silence,` `lifetime of silence`
you go against your claim that every human life is precious by attributing specific lengths of `silences`
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#7 Posted by scout on July 1, 2005 6:48:23 am
ozer,

you failed to include moments of silence for the shias killed by sunnis in pakistan, female infanticide in india, and honor killings in pakistan, and i don`t know if you mention the thousands of people killed by saddam, maybe you did, the whole `poetry` thing was a bit too much.

although i can understand your anguish and sentiments, kulsumbeig does have a point about political myopia
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#6 Posted by Gin-Baba on July 1, 2005 4:42:59 am
what a waste of time
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#5 Posted by kulsumbeig on July 1, 2005 4:01:05 am
Ozer

You are normally the ``voice of moderation`` but here you have gone down the slippery slope of conservatism. You are talking about the plight of people around the world and cozily pointing the finger at the ``West``. That is too easy a route to tread, and you, like many others before you have this irritating habit of blaming the West and Uncle Sam for everything.

Be more rational and pragmatic in your reasoning, stop resorting to melodrama, one-sidedness and crocodile tear-jerking. Eastern regimes are no more benevolent. Rulers, wherever they may be are guilty of similar attrocities. Your geographical anachronisms are stale and dated. Your political short-sightedness is vapid.
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#4 Posted by CD_Lion on July 1, 2005 3:11:26 am

(Enter the Lion)

Lion (L): Sniff, sniff…

L: (Ears perked up) [….tigers from Oslo]

L: (Disappointed) Oh, only paper tigers!

L: (Ears perked up) [….hundreds bite…]

L: (Disappointed) Oh, only dust!

L: (Ears perked up) […. hunters with hungry intent.]

L: (Disappointed) Oh, only diplomats!

L: (Ears perked up) […Bones buried in it.]

L: (Disappointed) Oh, only devastation!

L: (Ears perked up) […Keep on slaying]

L: (Animated) Bravo! ROAR!!! ROAR!!! (Bounds off)

(Exit the lion)
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#3 Posted by patwari on July 1, 2005 1:05:30 am
I am not against the sentiment of the poem feeling but after so many years go by after 9/11 this seem so outdated.
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#2 Posted by BeeJay on July 1, 2005 12:46:48 am

Dear Ozer,

Let me wipe (or perhaps mop) those tears! But wait – let me go get my buckets first! This one is so highly “inspiring”! If you don’t believe me, just read below!

BeeJay
(Benign Janitor)
- - - -

Ozer, Ozer, we love you so!
O how we wish, you’d NEVER go!
(And if you go, we cry boo-hoo!)
((Psst!) Doctor Lok Raj especially so)
(Who likes not count, but loves mango!)
So sweet thy tongue – behold and lo
If only were it forked not so!
Ozer, Ozer, we love you so!

[Why not also have 10 years of silence for the decade long embargo on Babylon. A once Blessed Baghdad now pregnant with torture and killing….]
And where were you, O great, great knight
When Saddam’s thumb crushed rank and file
For sure, O sir, yes you Ozer
Now THAT was just internal stuff
You see we judge situations so!

[Why not mourn for the dead victims of Kashmir?
The wail of a valley. A valley where too many tears turn to blood….]
O how you break my heart, so sweet
Now ask Abdul to hold acid
Acid on face of sweet, sweet lass
Hark, Ozer only saves HIS ass!

[If you want a moment of silence
Then take it from the echo of my voice….]
And how that voice is never done
A thousand words, when much is one!

[A million and a half years of silence for the million and-a-half Iraqi people….]
Silence, silence golden indeed
Sweet Ozer, prove your word in DEED!


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#1 Posted by cayenne on June 30, 2005 11:38:45 pm
Cut the crap, Ozer.I was `there`, i have scars to remind me for the rest of my life.Part of the reason i`m `here` is my search to find what makes people like the terrorists who struck that day `tick`, so to speak.Those people were terrorists and whoever is associated even accidentally will bear the burden of suffering by retaliatory forces.What we give out we get.What comes around goes around.I have no sympathy for the Afghans, Iraqis and all those in the middle east/pakistan part of the muslim world who are allowed,either by apathy or hatred by the general population, to forment terrorism on others.If the middle east muslims believe in their causes there are other means to pursue them.Not by formenting terrorism.Screw them all.
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