The Nightmare
Arshia Qazi March 25, 2006
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#5 Posted by epiphany on April 11, 2006 3:41:55 am
Arshia Qazi,
An articulated nightmare.
A feeling never reciprocated, in elaborated time, never matures to transform into love. If she seeks him, in love, he must seek her, too. Otherwise what she feels is devotion, at best, not love.
Peace!
PS: I used ``she`` to refer to the protagonist. I thought that an active `verbology` ought to fare better with the mind conceiving my point.
An articulated nightmare.
A feeling never reciprocated, in elaborated time, never matures to transform into love. If she seeks him, in love, he must seek her, too. Otherwise what she feels is devotion, at best, not love.
Peace!
PS: I used ``she`` to refer to the protagonist. I thought that an active `verbology` ought to fare better with the mind conceiving my point.
#4 Posted by arshia on April 7, 2006 7:58:15 am
Re: # 2
Thankyou for liking it, it was just a very humble effort.
About the concept of hell, you are free to percieve it in any way you want to. It somehow symbolizes the person`s inner turmoil.
Thankyou for liking it, it was just a very humble effort.
About the concept of hell, you are free to percieve it in any way you want to. It somehow symbolizes the person`s inner turmoil.
#2 Posted by mmobeen on April 1, 2006 2:12:08 pm
i like it...the ending`s quite creative, trying to find him in hell..(Y) it really does happen when one doesn`t move on...you die sooner or latter!
#1 Posted by bjkumar on March 25, 2006 5:24:02 am
I was trying very hard to make sense of this piece. And the last line essentially captures it for me.
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