Sins of a Freeborn

Finally read it all without hurry. It is very well-written and some parts are really gripping. Waiting/Searching for Godot who would speak.

Re: Ras

Length is always a problem for me. I am too longwinded. That was essentially what people would call the `brainstorming` part of writing, ie, pouring everything out onto paper. I did not touch it again after I wrote it the first time. For sentimental reasons. Note the date-It is like a mini journal and I am hesistant to change it now. But rest assured, for everything I did/am doing this year, I am throwing out redundant parts, and attempting to use some grey cells.....Not easy.

Thanks for putting out the only comment:)