Yom Kippur 5764/Flight
Kyla Pasha February 21, 2004
#14 Posted by SamiT on March 20, 2004 6:42:51 am
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#13 Posted by noetherf on March 5, 2004 6:33:57 am
We all look for God and God is love. As Khalil Gibran puts it:
When you love you should not say, ``God is in my heart,`` but rather, ``I am in the heart of God.`` And think not you can direct the course of love, for love, if it finds you worthy, directs your course.
Also: All these things shall love do unto you that you may know the secrets of your heart, and in that knowledge become a fragment of life`s heart.
That was brilliant poetry Kyla, keep it up!!
Cheers
noetherf
When you love you should not say, ``God is in my heart,`` but rather, ``I am in the heart of God.`` And think not you can direct the course of love, for love, if it finds you worthy, directs your course.
Also: All these things shall love do unto you that you may know the secrets of your heart, and in that knowledge become a fragment of life`s heart.
That was brilliant poetry Kyla, keep it up!!
Cheers
noetherf
#12 Posted by lala on March 5, 2004 2:03:09 am
addition of wonder in beauty...........simply superp lines....would be glad to hear more from u on cultural scripitures
#11 Posted by kyla on February 27, 2004 12:24:15 am
That last stanza should read:
But the ground just rumbles
and I look for claws and wings
to dig and fly away to you,
my love
To you. Not from you. Just so you know.
But the ground just rumbles
and I look for claws and wings
to dig and fly away to you,
my love
To you. Not from you. Just so you know.
#10 Posted by NeverTheMind on February 25, 2004 1:22:36 am
This is really Good , hope to hear more from you!!
#8 Posted by midihash on February 23, 2004 12:20:37 am
hi there hybird (a.k.a Fazloo),
you continue to amaze me, and me, i`m just a lowly pheasant.
m
you continue to amaze me, and me, i`m just a lowly pheasant.
m
#7 Posted by storyteller on February 22, 2004 9:44:48 am
as i signed in at chowk i was muttering about the unfairness of not getting my poem published and that maybe the chowk staff might not be all that bright.....and then i read your poems.
now i`m gonna shut up.
now i`m gonna shut up.
#6 Posted by temporal on February 22, 2004 9:27:56 am
kyla:
just a quick note of welcome!
more later
hope you attempt that saqi one
lve
t
just a quick note of welcome!
more later
hope you attempt that saqi one
lve
t
#4 Posted by nooralain on February 22, 2004 7:30:26 am
kyla,
welcome to chowk!
these are such moving poems. the image of victory penitent is very powerful.
glad to see another Pacific Northwesterner in these parts. . .
hope to see more from you.
n~
welcome to chowk!
these are such moving poems. the image of victory penitent is very powerful.
glad to see another Pacific Northwesterner in these parts. . .
hope to see more from you.
n~
#3 Posted by PunjabiZulu on February 22, 2004 2:17:18 am
Kyla
I loved them. You have real talent. Keep writing poetry.
#2 Posted by Jahil on February 22, 2004 2:10:11 am
the flight is too good.
however, with your permission i`ll make a little suggestion.
you said,
``but I can follow you
underground and overland, I can follow you.``
however i`m tied down and i can not move... so can`t it be something like...
``but wherever you go
underground or overland
Im heaved away with you`` or something where Im pulled with him rather then moving myself..
This was just a suggestion, otherwise its too good to be true.
Mercy.
however, with your permission i`ll make a little suggestion.
you said,
``but I can follow you
underground and overland, I can follow you.``
however i`m tied down and i can not move... so can`t it be something like...
``but wherever you go
underground or overland
Im heaved away with you`` or something where Im pulled with him rather then moving myself..
This was just a suggestion, otherwise its too good to be true.
Mercy.
#1 Posted by Maryam on February 21, 2004 8:37:14 pm
If I could love every contour
of your body a thousand times
if I could swim or drown with you
if I could kiss you and one more time
bring this madness to fruition
OHmYGOD..I LOWE IT!
that`s how love should be..unquenchable, insatiable, rooted in space like eternity...
and then i wake up.
of your body a thousand times
if I could swim or drown with you
if I could kiss you and one more time
bring this madness to fruition
OHmYGOD..I LOWE IT!
that`s how love should be..unquenchable, insatiable, rooted in space like eternity...
and then i wake up.
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