Temporal August 10, 2004
#28 Posted by rahul_capri on August 16, 2004 9:57:20 pm
no i hadnt read that one..it was great thanks..and it in turn reminded me of ``Lukman Ali`` by Soumitra Mohan..he was the icon of akavita movement in Hindi poetry..just as N.M.Rashid and Meerazi were of Azaad Nazm in Urdu..its a pity that our Elliot and Yeats quoting intelligentsia are quickly forgetting these great poets..
#27 Posted by Warlus on August 16, 2004 11:36:06 am
This was actually nice. Better than most poems at chowk. Karachi`s like that, specially
liked the begger parts.
liked the begger parts.
#26 Posted by Nadia_Zehra on August 15, 2004 11:43:26 pm
#24 by rahul_capri :
Have You read Hassan Koozagar
Jaha.n Zad! Neechay gali mai.n teray Dar kay Agay!
Yeh mai.n SoKhta Sar hassan Koozagar hoo
Tujhey Subh Bazar mai.n
Borhay At-tar Yousuf ki Dukan per mai.n nay Dekha
To teri Nighaho.n mai.n Woh Tabnaki thi
Mai.n jin ki hasrat mai.n
No(9) Saal Dewana Phirta Raha hoo.
Jaha.n Zad No(9) Saal Dewana Phirta Raha hoo
Yeh Woh Daur tha jis mai.n
Mai.n
nay apney Ranjoor Koozo.n ki Taraf Palat kar na Dekha.
.
.
.
.
(Quite a lenghty poem....)
I felt this one.
Have You read Hassan Koozagar
Jaha.n Zad! Neechay gali mai.n teray Dar kay Agay!
Yeh mai.n SoKhta Sar hassan Koozagar hoo
Tujhey Subh Bazar mai.n
Borhay At-tar Yousuf ki Dukan per mai.n nay Dekha
To teri Nighaho.n mai.n Woh Tabnaki thi
Mai.n jin ki hasrat mai.n
No(9) Saal Dewana Phirta Raha hoo.
Jaha.n Zad No(9) Saal Dewana Phirta Raha hoo
Yeh Woh Daur tha jis mai.n
Mai.n
nay apney Ranjoor Koozo.n ki Taraf Palat kar na Dekha.
.
.
.
.
(Quite a lenghty poem....)
I felt this one.
#25 Posted by SaimaShah on August 15, 2004 6:36:16 pm
hey temporal are you in Karachi? Am in Karachi for a couple of weeks--let`s meet.
SS
SS
#24 Posted by rahul_capri on August 15, 2004 6:09:24 pm
Nadia_Zehra -
``Your poem BEGGAR`S FACE - I and II create the same sensation as reading a Noon Meem Rashid`s piece.``
Any particular one ,may I ask?
I am guessing ``Aadmi se darte ho..``
``Your poem BEGGAR`S FACE - I and II create the same sensation as reading a Noon Meem Rashid`s piece.``
Any particular one ,may I ask?
I am guessing ``Aadmi se darte ho..``
#23 Posted by kkkandk on August 14, 2004 12:38:40 pm
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#22 Posted by kaurasach on August 13, 2004 9:50:20 am
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#21 Posted by Nadia_Zehra on August 13, 2004 6:27:44 am
Temporal:
Poignant Poetry.
I could only sum-up my Hallucinating Hysteria which I result by bounded media :
I am Taken away to streets and roads .
Faces Rushing through
As Blood through veins.
Each one ruptured.
Noise, Blast to a chaos...
Sudden Shock,
All Die Down..
The calmity is fearing.
Heart is what I only earing.
I don`t hear guns any more.
But fresh Blood soiling marks.
Your poem BEGGAR`S FACE - I and II create the same sensation as reading a Noon Meem Rashid`s piece.
Wish If you reproduce in Urdu ``Tareh``.
Regards
Poignant Poetry.
I could only sum-up my Hallucinating Hysteria which I result by bounded media :
I am Taken away to streets and roads .
Faces Rushing through
As Blood through veins.
Each one ruptured.
Noise, Blast to a chaos...
Sudden Shock,
All Die Down..
The calmity is fearing.
Heart is what I only earing.
I don`t hear guns any more.
But fresh Blood soiling marks.
Your poem BEGGAR`S FACE - I and II create the same sensation as reading a Noon Meem Rashid`s piece.
Wish If you reproduce in Urdu ``Tareh``.
Regards
#20 Posted by ofayyaz on August 12, 2004 10:16:16 am
Hello T
Your observations are so correct, human; and your descriptions are so descriptive.
Doors.... it`s unfortunate and sad, but true. Humans are a strange species.
Best of luck
Your observations are so correct, human; and your descriptions are so descriptive.
Doors.... it`s unfortunate and sad, but true. Humans are a strange species.
Best of luck
#19 Posted by kaurasach on August 12, 2004 9:12:34 am
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#13 Posted by chowkstaff on August 11, 2004 9:08:58 am
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