The Landlady

Re: # 10
Sanaullah...thanks for your thoughtful and detailed comments and generous praise.
TS

Re: # 9

Thanks, Astha...for sharing your appreciation of my piece.
TS

Tahera, I read some of your work at Chowk , cant resist saying that you have a natural gift for writing. I say natural because of your ability to stretch the plot to the right length

The tingle of a very soft satire that rarely stings bitterly is the reflection of a mind that is indeed not very philosophical yet keep pondering at the inner side of the tings, but most delightful is the under current of humor that forces the reader to keep smiling until a sudden twist broke it to an unfortunate end - Humor in fiction is a very tricky thing.

Its amazing that you have written so much in a short period of time. must be a very fertile mind.

A lovely story... Made for a very enjoyable read! :)

Re: # 7

dilsenomad1977...thankyou.
TS

Very nice.

dilsenomad.wordpress.com

Thanks, scorp_afghan.

Excellent stuff.

Re: # 3
Hmm...Aasia, thanks for the comments.

The boundaries of 'rights' are often confused. Simply put, however: 'your right to stretch your arm ends where the other person's nose begins'.

I don't quite agree, though, with the concept of 'victimhood'. Even 'not taking a choice' is a choice, and no one else is responsible for the consequences but the one who chose to make that choice'!!!

keep up the good work...........very impressive.......makes me wonder sometimes if what we call "rights" and/or "selfish motives" are not thrust upon us even before we are born!!!may be we are all victims in the end ????

Re: # 1
Thanks for appreciating my piece, Faisal.K. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Quite Brilliant and touching!!!