I thirst
Sahir Shah January 4, 2008
#7 Posted by sahir_shah on January 19, 2008 5:15:31 pm
Re: # 6 mangotree
Im not sure what to say bout it either. but visceral is good, yes?
Im not sure what to say bout it either. but visceral is good, yes?
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#6 Posted by mangotree on January 19, 2008 6:27:31 am
I am not sure what to say on this poem; as hurricane said, the instincts are rather visceral - but you get full points on the clarity of expression.
Regards
mangotree
Regards
mangotree
#5 Posted by mangotree on January 19, 2008 6:27:27 am
I am not sure what to say on this poem; as hurricane said, the instincts are rather visceral - but you get full points on the clarity of expression.
Regards
mangotree
Regards
mangotree
#4 Posted by sahir_shah on January 18, 2008 9:52:55 am
Dear Nikhat,
Thank you for your encouragement, I truly appreciate it.
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Sahir
Thank you for your encouragement, I truly appreciate it.
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Sahir
#3 Posted by Nikhat on January 17, 2008 4:59:03 am
I have read your poetry many times brother, every time the magnitude of love it transcends shrouded within deep pain left my heart heavy. Very touchy.
Sahir naam kee laaj rakhte hain aap.
Nikhat Riaz
Sahir naam kee laaj rakhte hain aap.
Nikhat Riaz
#2 Posted by sahir_shah on January 8, 2008 10:18:53 am
Mister hurricane
Thank you? I guess?
I mentioned Benzair marhoom because it is a national tragedy that effected all Pakistanis.
Thank you? I guess?
I mentioned Benzair marhoom because it is a national tragedy that effected all Pakistanis.
#1 Posted by hurricane on January 7, 2008 10:22:46 pm
Damn that is a beautiful poem.
Are you by any chance a victim of a suicide bombing....or mayhaps you work at the morgue? The descriptions are so visceral and intimate, it appears that you have first hand experience at this slicing and dicing!
Is that byline, you know, the BB mention, is that perhaps the new way to get published on chowk now? Don't get me wrong, I like the poem and all, but just curious.
With thundering respect,
the hurricane.
Are you by any chance a victim of a suicide bombing....or mayhaps you work at the morgue? The descriptions are so visceral and intimate, it appears that you have first hand experience at this slicing and dicing!
Is that byline, you know, the BB mention, is that perhaps the new way to get published on chowk now? Don't get me wrong, I like the poem and all, but just curious.
With thundering respect,
the hurricane.
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