Revelations of a Stone Collector

Sana Mulji April 3, 2001

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#8 Posted by Raw_Dust on April 9, 2001 9:57:41 am

bigger stones and specks of sands....

hmm.. quite simple and nice picture..

keep writing...

bugger off.

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#7 Posted by Ras Siddiqui on April 6, 2001 10:38:42 am

Well written poem but too much ``piling`` going on.

Ras

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#6 Posted by temporal on April 5, 2001 6:02:52 pm

Sana:

...welcome...quite reflections...dust to dust?

...are the souls breathing?...who knows...and not facetiously...who cares?

...liked the way you...

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... but someone missed out on I...:)

love,

temporal

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#5 Posted by Emanon on April 5, 2001 10:02:40 am

Reading your poem revelations of a stone collector was like shaking hands with Pablo Neruda. The pulse of the poem has a flowing metaphoric and visual rythm. If you live in Islamabad i would like to meet you and shake your hand. Keep on churning more of such good poetry.

Wajahat Malik

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#4 Posted by Urstruly on April 4, 2001 12:30:49 pm

Scout

Sorry, didnt mean it.

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#3 Posted by scout on April 4, 2001 11:46:02 am

Sana,

ummm, it was a nice poem.

Urstruly #2,

don`t attach retarded suffixes like `pyari` after my name.

thanks