The Girl in the Meadow

it should be for everyone, not just young children, anyway, the story was sweet

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errr...

may be it`s just that I`m not THAT artistically inclined. Or may be I`m getting too old.

In any case, WOW what a story!

(May I now join the club of the artistically refined... pleaseeee!)

i wanna eat ripe rasberries under a tree too dammit!

Nice theme! welcome to chowk Socratez!

Temporal, take over .. :)

Re Socratez

Nice thought which u have conveyed. Hope to see more of you.

regards

Irfan

As with most other stuff on chowk, I seemed to have missed the point completely.

Maybe I should read it again!

I absolutely loved it! It`s a beautiful story...

What a wonderful story !

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Boy Sentenced to 11 Years Prison for Mugging Mates for $3

ANKARA A 16 year-old who robbed 3.75 million lira (around 3 dollars) and a wristwatch off two friends has been sentenced to 11 years and one month imprisonment, the daily * * * Hurriyet * * * * reported Wednesday as carried by DPA. The boy, referred to only as U.D., had been playing at a video arcade in the southern city of Adana when it was alleged that he pretended to have a gun in his pocket and ordered his friends to hand over their money. U.D. told the court that he and his friends had been betting on the outcome of their games and that he was owed 10 million lira by his friends. He said the money he received and the watch was in payment for this debt

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Socratez:

Beautiful! :)

Your story reminded me of a poem by Sir Iqbal, ``Aik-Arzoo.`` Samar was fortunate to be able to enjoy the meadow. Iqbal wishes for many things in his poem. Now, if the fortunate reader comes across a scenario/picture that was described in ``Aik Arzoo``, they feel really blessed.


Regards.

PS: Thank you for a nice read for grown-up children. :)

Excellent theme but needs rigorous refining. The reader loses touch with the flowers, meadows and clouds because of the redundancy.

Socratz welcome to chowk, and dont take my comments too seriously; I am just a reader and not an abba ji of criticism.