Lucky Dog!
Zeejah October 29, 2002
#15 Posted by akber on October 31, 2002 4:30:03 pm
hellOo zee,
welcome back ..
:)
keep more coming jaldi jaldi ..
you were missed ..
welcome back ..
:)
keep more coming jaldi jaldi ..
you were missed ..
reply to this interact
write a new interact
add to favorites
flag objectionable content
#14 Posted by Ras on October 30, 2002 7:22:54 am
Great Poem!
Expresses a great deal without leaving the environment
of its setting.
Ras
#13 Posted by zeejah on October 29, 2002 6:15:34 pm
Urstruly. .. i still believe that murderers should be brought to book... wotever the colour of their skin...
#12 Posted by Zakkk on October 29, 2002 2:27:41 pm
Appropriate, timely, nicely written...you`ve been gone from chowk for to long..welcome back:)
#11 Posted by Urstruly on October 29, 2002 10:18:23 am
What is the use of this whining now. When murder and mayhem was about to descend upon helpless, you were busy justifying its moral ambiguities. Now you weep.
#10 Posted by zeejah on October 27, 2002 10:25:44 am
no sadna...it isnt deep... and no, i insiste that there is no hint of karzai anywhere in my poem...:)
the poem is just about the ordinary ppl whose lives were ripped apart for no fault of their own...
zee
the poem is just about the ordinary ppl whose lives were ripped apart for no fault of their own...
zee
#9 Posted by sadna on October 27, 2002 5:45:11 am
zeejah #7
Really? Didn`t think so either but then I thought wait a minute.. Better read it again, your composition is deeper than you thought :)
Really? Didn`t think so either but then I thought wait a minute.. Better read it again, your composition is deeper than you thought :)
#7 Posted by zeejah on October 26, 2002 10:50:04 am
sadna... i never mentioned karzai anywhere in the poem!...:)
#6 Posted by sadna on October 26, 2002 7:17:30 am
``An afghan hound it was Sleek, well fed and groomed`` ``hills Where nightly skies rained death``
If you mean poor Mr Karzai, who is the tall and gaunt woman ? Do you mean..?
If you mean poor Mr Karzai, who is the tall and gaunt woman ? Do you mean..?
#5 Posted by Gem_in_the_eye on October 25, 2002 2:39:20 pm
Zeejah-
Well Done! Your poem carries the reader to the heart of the ``tall and gaunt`` woman...very poignant.
-Gem in the eye
Well Done! Your poem carries the reader to the heart of the ``tall and gaunt`` woman...very poignant.
-Gem in the eye
#4 Posted by Ansari on October 23, 2002 11:39:29 pm
Zeejah,
Enjoyed this a lot. Thank you very much.
Aamir
Enjoyed this a lot. Thank you very much.
Aamir
#3 Posted by Ajeet on October 23, 2002 4:28:56 pm
Isn`t there a hindi song with the same sentiment. Goes something like:
`Kuchh woh kutte haiN jo karoN maiN.
MemmoN ki bahoN maiN sir rakh ke soiN,
Kuchh hum pillay haiN jo sardi maiN
saDkoN pe...... royaN.....
....Chhota sa pappu maiN jauN kahaN mere
Batueh maiN paisa no dehla....
`Kuchh woh kutte haiN jo karoN maiN.
MemmoN ki bahoN maiN sir rakh ke soiN,
Kuchh hum pillay haiN jo sardi maiN
saDkoN pe...... royaN.....
....Chhota sa pappu maiN jauN kahaN mere
Batueh maiN paisa no dehla....
#2 Posted by temporal on October 23, 2002 11:50:25 am
Zeejah!
..welcome back...it has been a while...nice poem...in our country some dogs and some servants and some relatives can be lucky indeed...while the majority go through the motions of spending their alloted time with a zombie like hopeless look in eyes...
lve,
t
..welcome back...it has been a while...nice poem...in our country some dogs and some servants and some relatives can be lucky indeed...while the majority go through the motions of spending their alloted time with a zombie like hopeless look in eyes...
lve,
t
#1 Posted by Brat on October 23, 2002 11:30:12 am
Zeejah welcome back! Great to see you on Chowk. As usual like your poem!!
Interact Index
Similar Articles
- They Will Seal The Case Sheets! Prashant Bhatt
- Ahmed Faraz (1931-2008) – The Romantic Rebel Zaki Rahman
- Muhammad Aslam Khan Khattak: A Man for All Seasons Zeejah
- Terrorism Accused: Is Legal Aid Justified? Shridhar Naik
- Losing the Battle, Losing the Faith Ehtisham Iqbal
US Elections 2008 Primaries
Get Chowk RSS FeedLatest Interacts
- ahmedmadani: Re: # 9 Good... Three Cups of Tea
- MeiraJ08: yes, Morni my city... The Cry of Karachi
- morni: If any one can... The Cry of Karachi
- tahmed32: Tea for you, Masadi... Three Cups of Tea
- tahmed32: yawn...so,how was your weekend,... The Republican Red Scare
- peonofthewest: see how pathetic you... Three Cups of Tea
- altar: I am going to... The Heart of Starkness:
- KaalChakra: "Now or Never" is... Muhammad Aslam Khan Khattak:
