Sister Lies
Fatima Razi September 9, 2004
#12 Posted by syke on September 14, 2004 7:07:28 am
interesting.. a good read...waiting 4 something more now.
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#10 Posted by faredoon_freddy on September 9, 2004 9:06:56 pm
epiphanies have come to me during many a vodka haze and/or nights without sleep and i only seem to despise them after ive discovered their wonders.. intimate words fatima, you have guts girl you have guts..
#9 Posted by savvy on September 9, 2004 5:42:20 pm
Loved the lines .. truly sad but sadly , the truth:
I hate old friends
They can hurt you the most
Pulling at your deepest insecurities
They know where to stab, or twist
Then pull you into strong arms
And whisper away your pain
I hate old friends
They can hurt you the most
Pulling at your deepest insecurities
They know where to stab, or twist
Then pull you into strong arms
And whisper away your pain
#8 Posted by rahul_capri on September 9, 2004 5:42:20 pm
Fatima, you have uncliched the cliched and struck a chord with so many people.
thanks for sharing...
thanks for sharing...
#7 Posted by imran on September 9, 2004 12:56:42 pm
Very nice..........
hoping to read more from you....
hoping to read more from you....
#5 Posted by rozaiba on September 9, 2004 9:43:54 am
wonderful stuff. one of the poems on chowk, i sort of `got`. i also like your name.
#4 Posted by Maria526 on September 9, 2004 9:43:53 am
brilliant piece.
like someone was writing my thoughts. :)
like someone was writing my thoughts. :)
#2 Posted by ELUSIVE on September 9, 2004 6:07:05 am
Good work! The poem has rythematic balance and yet whilst reading it, i absorbed the words as if they were part of a conversation.
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Human Beings are repeatedly manipulated and they sometimes, willingly allow themselves to be manipulated.
``Then pull you into strong arms
And whisper away your pain``
How true...
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``I hate the gap between fingers
So much slips right through``
Simply beautiful!
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Keep it Up.
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Human Beings are repeatedly manipulated and they sometimes, willingly allow themselves to be manipulated.
``Then pull you into strong arms
And whisper away your pain``
How true...
--
``I hate the gap between fingers
So much slips right through``
Simply beautiful!
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Keep it Up.
#1 Posted by FarzanaVersey on September 9, 2004 1:01:00 am
Fatima:
I have been sitting in a closed room where these very thoughts have been echoing for long...and now I read them, from another soul in a place I don`t know, with experiences that have made the refrain of `sister lies` a strange bondage. There are some very fine lines of depth in your poem...
I also liked the delicious irony of the typo in the footnote....``There are moments and memories in everything we right``...so much precious time we spend in making `right` what we are made to believe is `wrong`.
Regards...
I have been sitting in a closed room where these very thoughts have been echoing for long...and now I read them, from another soul in a place I don`t know, with experiences that have made the refrain of `sister lies` a strange bondage. There are some very fine lines of depth in your poem...
I also liked the delicious irony of the typo in the footnote....``There are moments and memories in everything we right``...so much precious time we spend in making `right` what we are made to believe is `wrong`.
Regards...
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