Synchronicity (Novella part 1 of 2)

All of you guys waiting for part 2, it was supposed to be up here, but its not. So you can check it out at my ILog journal in chowk, at http://www.chowk.com/show_interactor_page.cgi?membername=umairn

All of you guys waiting for part 2, it was supposed to be up here, but its not. So you can check it out at my ILog journal in chowk, at http://www.chowk.com/show_interactor_page.cgi?membername=umairn

Thanks for the patience eesh... it should be here any day...

Sooooo... where`s the second part............ are you still here!!!!!!!
Am I still here???????

Waiting on 2nd part, man! don`t leave to another time-space afore that.

cheers,

Thank you for the encouragement Subroto. It means a lot!

Really liked this Umair can`t wait for part 2. You get this published.

Thanks for the encouraging comments guys! I hope you guys read part 2 and like that too.

Very well written and a very interesting concept!

nice

I`m sure you are correct Urstruly, but I wouldn`t know, because i have never seen `the outer limits`! Appreciate your comments nonetheless.

Interesting enough to keep your attention focused but frankly the first part was like one of the 10,000 stories alraedy shown on `The Outer Limits`. Ho sakta hay doosri episode mein aap koi saanp nikal dain.

Thank you eesh and fara for the feedback. I`m glad you guys are finding it engrossing! The second part should be able to clear up most of the un-answered questions. And fara, I have tried to portray parallel universes where we exist differently, according to the diff choices we may have made; its not simply `time travel` but more `parallel travel`!

Thank you for the feedback eesh and fara. Part 2 shd be able to deal with most of the un-answered questions. And fara, i have tried to portray parallel worlds, where we exist according to the different choices we might have made. So its not simply `time travel`, but more aptly `parallel travel`!

agree with eesh, it was intersting the way you`ve explained `time travel`. but the story becomes a little predictable towards the end.

waiting for the next part...

hey UN... engrossing indeed. I kept reading and reading. Only near the end, I started feeling I know what is going to happen.

Waiting to see what happens next.... what happens to new simone...... and how does ``I wont tell you to remember me, but I cant bear for you to forget me..`` relate to all this.

Thank you for the kind comments ELUSIVE. The second part should be in here by next week.