With a drop
I like the part when you said:
Dreams, desires, longing
All in chorus
Thunder the space
With a hungry tale
Of a long ago
Hardly forgotten
Recalled with a drop.
the part when you say:
Sweeter than plums,
Slower than sunset,
is cute.
Aliya (7 years old)
Posted by
Aliya1
Apr 18, 2000 10:24 pm
Your poem is great!I like the part when you said:
Dreams, desires, longing
All in chorus
Thunder the space
With a hungry tale
Of a long ago
Hardly forgotten
Recalled with a drop.
the part when you say:
Sweeter than plums,
Slower than sunset,
is cute.
Aliya (7 years old)
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