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I have this feeling that you posted this poem just to enjoy the reaction of the people. And you log in everyday to read the latest, with a big smirk on your face........ But if you actually care for the interaction, I would like to contribute my two pence.
I think its a good poem. You have a nice way of writing. The simplicity of the composition vis a vis the complexity of the topic, makes an interesting picture.
It happens to be an experience we all have.... as you mentioned in your reply # 28. But why delve in something associated with our instincts, when we have matured into something much higher, and the human mind has reached its phenomenal status? We all have a digestive system, and maybe a good poem can be written about the functions of a pancreas, but should it really be written? Why not write about emotions, experience, causes, effects, conclusions and concepts?
Forgive me for saying this, but it seems that you are only focusing on experiences which have a very common and yet a very individual nature. Like getting by mosquitoes.
Regards,
Jamil
Posted by
jamil_ud_din
Apr 14, 2001 08:09 pm
Hi,I have this feeling that you posted this poem just to enjoy the reaction of the people. And you log in everyday to read the latest, with a big smirk on your face........ But if you actually care for the interaction, I would like to contribute my two pence.
I think its a good poem. You have a nice way of writing. The simplicity of the composition vis a vis the complexity of the topic, makes an interesting picture.
It happens to be an experience we all have.... as you mentioned in your reply # 28. But why delve in something associated with our instincts, when we have matured into something much higher, and the human mind has reached its phenomenal status? We all have a digestive system, and maybe a good poem can be written about the functions of a pancreas, but should it really be written? Why not write about emotions, experience, causes, effects, conclusions and concepts?
Forgive me for saying this, but it seems that you are only focusing on experiences which have a very common and yet a very individual nature. Like getting by mosquitoes.
Regards,
Jamil
A Little Death
Posted by
jamil_ud_din
Apr 5, 2001 10:02 am
I was wondering Zeejah, if you know that in French, ``la petite morte`` translated as ``the little death`` means an orgasm.
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