Moderate Muslims First decide if Islam has main five tenants or main five tenets. A tenant is easily disposed of or replaced by another temporary source of well-being.

Shammo’s Curse This was fantastic. True to life, amazing imagery, dialogs and emotions. One can relate to it cent per cent.

Mukhtar Mai Pitiful.

Jealous Lamentable.

Reality bites! Continue cogitating. You`ll get somewhere.

The Diary of a Pretty Young Thing tamed, it was an observation on your intellectual skills.

The Diary of a Pretty Young Thing Rubbish.

My Little Bit of Hindu Trash.

The Music Of The Song Of Life This piece brought only one word to mind: Fairies.

The Music Of The Song Of Life As in the good sense, of course.

The Funeral of Aunti Ummid Saminashah - will you ever learn to just SHUT UP woman? Someone who can use the word ``ratiocination`` in an allegory definitely knows more than you about the pathological reasoning behind his characters. Will you ever just pack it in? I`ve been watching your priggy pedantic on maneuvers just about everything someone`s ever written. You`re such a show-off it`s sickening.

The Funeral of Aunti Ummid My God!

Towards a Ramzaan Sunset Good, clear writing. There is a little disjoint between the the wagon wride and the start of the classes. Liked the exchange between the conductors, and the rickshaw entering the world of the Golden Arches.

Papa Pap and the Bad Little Girl Where was the wit in this? Is it Yawnfest Week on Chowk?

The Gray Cotton Shawl You do not need to take a course in creative writing to write like this.

Indigo X Poignant.