That Whore
Posted by
oxygen
Mar 30, 2004 06:37 am
good writting and good stuff...I enjoyed the reading..anxiously looking for the end since the begining of text. Nice end
Past
whole poem is exellent, filled with deep feelings..but this one is the best..probably a fact with most of us...
``Truth was never incomprehensible,
Until, destiny took its ruthless course.
The inevitable fate became fact;
No glass ever shattered with such remorse… ``
Overall, a very nice effort..
Posted by
oxygen
Mar 29, 2004 09:49 pm
Such writtings directly interacts with souls...whole poem is exellent, filled with deep feelings..but this one is the best..probably a fact with most of us...
``Truth was never incomprehensible,
Until, destiny took its ruthless course.
The inevitable fate became fact;
No glass ever shattered with such remorse… ``
Overall, a very nice effort..
When I see you again
Posted by
oxygen
Nov 15, 2003 12:31 am
matter for both future and the past, charished the memories and made things thougthful..good words
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