Laddo Ki Shadi Re: # 6 darling......i am not writing a novel.....the work has enough detail for an 1100 words story.....thanx......whats wedding of sundri......???

Laddo Ki Shadi amrita......thanx...the story is based on real characters and both the ladies died in reality.....polly died less then 2 months ago.....depressing to see their lives wasted....although none ever talked to me.....polly met me once in the past 6 years...i had some idea whats going on in their life....i decided to pen it all down...their names just evaporated from earth..and Capri.....i write often though am not seasoned....lol...but i dont get published that often...thanx
ammara

Could I Handle Two? how did u get that survey done...sex among three.....none goes satisfied.....thank god u didnt have it with those venezvalan salon girls.....u wud have given pakistani males a bad rep in bed.......u had the message....ab hum kiya kurein jee?

The Not-so-happy Hooker chowk is a good platform to release ones frustration......take a break shandana.....

India Did Not Kick Us Out the article is a news breafing......what is it doing here.........kulharee bhai......how bout making a movie on mukhtaran......?u can b the producer......i the director and the internationally acclaimed kermani jee.......can b the.....you know what!

Murder of a Killer the story was chilling...its unusual for chowk to publish such a write up but whats wrong in publishing it...true naveed deserved such an end.....but i wud have appreciated had he been prosecuted in court rather then die on street.....and he should have reached the end earlier.....before he could harm so many people

Murder of a Killer good journalism......kamran bhai how do u get this underworld info......? just curious......i read many articles like these.....related to trafficking mafia and drug dealers......i always wonder how journalists reach there.......c u
ammara

Military, Musharraf and Magic i got the point......good article.....thought provoking.....above all.....long articles r a big hassle...u r precise yet thought provoking.....a merit worth praise......!!! c u

She took the frying pan out its not a story......a description ......very pictorial..........ran like a movie.....but i miss the story...i am angry for it not being there......though i dont hate rejeshwari.....cu

Nostalgia, Inc. i liked reading it.....but my grandparents didnt tell me they had servants.....they were from the indian rural middle calss.....they lived in the village in a big house..with 30 or so chachiss dadis khala and who not......and so were my maternal grandparents in lahore.......but i have heard many people tell this tale......thanx......too bad the readership wasnt much!
ammara

Pigeon’s Meat nice story..... i had a maulvi for teaching quran and he used to hit me......plus..i know how they justify these acts......good one.....the pigeon stealing was good too and the pelsi being a sign of leing was wicked......thanx...ammara

Sheedah Badma’ash i like sheeda.......i feel sorry for sheeda......and he hasa nice name......sheeda budmash......

Ravi Thumkar’s Widow the story could have been shorter... even her quickly selling the house didnt make her seem wicked to me....it was just an attempt to move on with life.....but the message was a good one.....never judge people.

The Village of Kheruddin the story is ok...no matter how well written....ambiguity always stinks!

City Connection the story was too long ...the end pathetic...though the idea was promising.....decrease the length and put in some grey matter.......write more.....cya!

Parveen the story was ok.....i hate sad ends...the breats imagery had gone astray....and temporal urs was touching too...i wonder if they were true......not that it matters.....and wow...paro had some guts lol......thanx.